Bula Tara Your weta poem is very purple. It's also very interesting. I have discovered that any work you and Fern do together tends to be very creative and interesting.
Maybe next time you could work on getting rid of some of the clutter words. Also you could work on your naming skills. Other than that Ka pai.
Your simile is very creative. I can tell you have tried very hard. Check out my blog at https://karoroaleeceh.blogspot.co.nz/
Bula Tara
ReplyDeleteYour weta poem is very purple. It's also very interesting. I have discovered that any work you and Fern do together tends to be very creative and interesting.
Maybe next time you could work on getting rid of some of the clutter words. Also you could work on your naming skills. Other than that Ka pai.
Your simile is very creative. I can tell you have tried very hard. Check out my blog at https://karoroaleeceh.blogspot.co.nz/
Aleece